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He never was the monster himself. But in his chest, his monsters and demons run wild. They never leave him, not even in his happiest times, they roar louder, grow bigger in his silent nights.
He is fine, but they never stand still, he keeps a smile, while they're biting in the inside of his chest, trying to rip out every happy piece of him.

And then, there was her. The boy and the girl met in a moment, they nearly lost themselves in each of their lives. They were both close to the cliff, close to falling and never finding their way back to happiness. As they met, for a moment, the world stops spinning and every noise turns silent, every bird stops singing, everyone's world doesn't matter anymore, as their hearts understand, this was the path, they are meant to go. They were meant to be together.
She looked him in his eyes and saw his beauty, in his face, in his body, in his soul, deep in his soul she saw the monsters and demons, saw them biting him. And she fell in love. She fell in love with his bravery, with his constant will to survive, with his will to live a happy life, to be better everyday, even if he's still fighting. She also fell in love with his monsters and demons, because they were a part of him.
And he looked at her, flashed, how pure she looks at him, as if she saw every pain he ever felt, as if she knew, it was more pain than a single life can hold. As if she knew, the monsters and demons are still biting, even if he smiles, even if he laughs, they are there.

The boy and the girl came closer to each other, fell in love with each other's soul, with their broken sides, and the ones, that are already healed. They started to love every piece of each other in such a deep way, they never knew, someone could love them so much. Nothing was needed to be hidden. Everything was open. And the monsters and demons of the boy and the girl felt anxiety. Maybe not for the first time, but they felt the will of them both to fight their monsters and demons together.

The monsters and demons felt it, and everyday more often, they started to bite themselves instead in the chest of the two damaged souls. And someday in the future, there will be a moment, when the boy will rest his head on the leg of his love, and the roars, the screams and the pain will be silent. There will be no sound, only the pounding sound of each other's heart. And when they beat in sync there will be peace, a kind of peace that grows bigger everyday and will silent the monsters and demons forever.
 
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