Feedback jeder Art I am so ready for this year to end

[Donna]

I hold my breath and fall into awe
This time from night to morning I saw
Peering from between a patch of clouds,
like tufts of cotton that over crowds

Lazily watching, a pearly moon
Hiding behind barren trees, rough -hewn
I've never been more ready than now;
for this year to end, one big kapow

The weight of which has been suffocating
Fraught with too many negatives chasing
All the dastardly deeds that have trespassed;
the underhanded shit that has amassed

Uninvited, unwanted, unprovoked
The sum of which, is unequally yoked
Challenges slithering stealthily in
I'm dangling from a moonbeams silverskin
©Donna H.
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December 3, 2025