Feedback jeder Art To Wish Upon Your Star

[Donna]

Tonight, the stars lay their glittery blanket down
While the moon gradually wears a wispy cloud gown
There's a wind, that gently rocks the sweet gum trees
When missing you is a prayer, I'm on my knees

Wishing upon your bright star, are you happy there?
You should still be here, anything less isn't fair
Comfort lies in that you have been released from pain
A quick wave, the pent-up tears I cannot contain,
out they wail, from a deeply lacerated heart

I know your earthly vessel had to depart,
to finally find rest, after an arduous fight
If I could unravel time, your story I'd ghostwrite
Edit the bad chapters, rewrite a better end
I carry you with me, living for two, my friend
© Donna H.
January 5, 2026

 

[Teddybär]

Hallo Donna

Sehr feinfühlig, von Liebe getragen. Die Erinnerung an den Freund schmerzt, rührt zu Tränen. Das Rad der Zeit kann man nicht zurückdrehen, nichts besser machen. Der Tod war Erlösung, endlich frei von Schmerzen. Sein Stern bleibt in der Erinnerung und im Herzen.

Toll geschrieben, gern gelesen!
Teddybär 🐻